Wednesday, November 1, 2017

The Wedding of Jack-Patti-Sweet and Mandy

 With apologies to Jack Kerouac, Patti Smith, Larry Norman, the band Sweet.....and to Mandy.                                                                                                           
                                                                                                                                                                    so anyway there i was large majestic victorian house next to the y moaning seething breathing 1976 and 20 piss factory of a job huff huff huff she crawled into my bed like a cockroach the words she said got into my head like a waterfall she had big bell levis wife beater shirt man man man tight tight i loved her in the sad morning eight track tape player wired to a car battery boom boom boom downstairs neighbors neighbors to the side everybody square square square bitching screaming met some cats and chicks street folks paul jerry his wife with a collection of weirdos and bee bopps straight outta heaven and hell beer weed acid soapers laughter tears tears tears piss factory job huff huff huff 64 mustang was my chariot exhaust wasted fumes buzz buzz dizzy dark hair to her shoulders slim young fun boom boom my jeans were tight loved a knife and buckle fight sorry Mr. Norman wire frame glasses man oh man i dug her she dug me together with jim and munch in his gremlin with paul we made 3 we kissed soothingly softly sweetly sadly as the grem tossed about the sad country lanes she came to me in a skirt of green net sewn over w/flat metallic circles which dangled and flashed and when her memory visits on a pillow of sweat with toss toss turn and my hair is cropped craving covering i remember member remember member making love to her sweetly that sad morning two lost angels hung on a city shelf   

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  1. Hi Greg,

    Sorry for the delay in getting back to you, but thanks so much for your entry!

    You can read my feedback on your story here:
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